The title of the article i looked at is "When I Grow Up". I found this article on "Teenink", this article was written by Sara D from Wyckoff New Brunswick. This writer explains the thesis very well, the thesis is '' When I Grow Up". The opening paragraph of this article caught my attention well because it talks about being in kindergarten and thinking about what you wanna be when you finish school. This caught my attention because i always use to think about what i wanna be when i grow up and i still do.
There is 6 paragraphs in this thesis. All the paragraphs in this thesis relate and the writer backs it up with many examples. '' When I think about the future, I definitely don’t see myself working at the Market Basket, but in reality, if that was what would make me happy, I would do it."
The Writer also talks about doing what makes you happy when you grow up not just doing what you need too do. I liked this article,i understood it well and it made a lot of sense too me.
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